在南京環(huán)球教育（原環(huán)球雅思）張依甜老師具體講解這篇文章如何寫(xiě)之前，我們先看看政府都有哪些職能，同學(xué)們?cè)诳赐赆t(yī)療資源這篇的寫(xiě)法后，可以試著把這些論據(jù)用到別的方面的政府投資里面。

 

　　1.provide basic public services，like medical services and education

 

　　2.support people who are living in poverty or unable to work

 

　　3.raise money by taxing working people

 

　　4.introduce new laws

 

　　5.raise people's awareness of some issues，like climate change and a healthy lifestyle

 

　　6.regulate the activities of companies

 

　　7.be responsible for the security and well-being of their residents

 

　　Topic：Some people say that the government should pay for the health care of its citizens，but other people say that it is not the government's responsibility.What is your opinion？

　　開(kāi)頭段可以這樣寫(xiě)：

 

　　The problem of whether health-care resources should be provided by the government（原文是allocated分配，這里可以換成“提供”）so that they can be distributed in both the most just and most efficient way，is not a new one.Every country is faced with the need to decide how health care should be provided，what diseases and disabilities should be given priority and which members of the society should be given special consideration in respect to health needs.

 

　　化用原文當(dāng)中的詞句，適當(dāng)改變，用最貼合題目的詞句來(lái)寫(xiě)開(kāi)頭段。

 

　　主體段講為什么政府要負(fù)責(zé)醫(yī)療建設(shè)，思路篇里面講過(guò)的幾個(gè)理由可以拿來(lái)用。

 

　　An awareness was developing in many societies that people have a basic right to health care as a necessary condition of a proper human life.Like education，political and legal processes and institutions，public order，communication，transport and money supply，health-care came to be seen as one of the fundamental social facilities necessary for people to exercise their other rights as autonomous human beings.The provision of medical services by the government helps to maintain the stability and fairness of the society.

 

　　第一個(gè)主體段先說(shuō)醫(yī)療權(quán)利的重要性，是每個(gè)人不可或缺的，而政府提供能保證社會(huì)的公平和穩(wěn)定。

 

　　Additionally，basic health-care is now recognized as a'public good'，rather than a'private good'that one is expected to buy for oneself.It is also accepted that this right generates an obligation or duty for the state to ensure that adequate health-care are provide out of the public purse.Every taxpayer is entitled to enjoy this right provided by the government.

 

　　政府收納稅人納的稅，要提供醫(yī)療這種不用花錢(qián)購(gòu)買(mǎi)的公共產(chǎn)品。

 

　　When it became obvious that health-care resources could not possibly meet the demands being made upon them，people are demanding that their rights to health-care be satisfied by the state immediately.The second set of more specific changes that have led to the present concern about the provision of health-care resources stems from the dramatic rise in health costs，accompanied by large-scale social changes.The scale and level of difficulty providing medical services to the whole general public determines the position of the state to take this responsibility.

 

　　由于社會(huì)形態(tài)的改變以及醫(yī)療成本的上漲這些因素，導(dǎo)致醫(yī)療服務(wù)范圍的擴(kuò)大和難度的增肌，也決定只有政府才能解決這個(gè)難題。

 

　　Finally，private enterprises cannot be the best choice for consumers to receive medical services，because the main motive of profit making companies is to derive profits rather than promoting health delivery system.In order to run their expensive models，they are not even hesitant to do unethical practices，for example，tempting patients into accepting expensive medicine，diagnosis and surgical procedures whose effects might be the same as cheaper alternative ones.

 

　　Thus，it is reasonable to let the government takes the place of these selfish companies.This policy can put the priority of health care back into interests of the public，and help to reduce the medical costs as well.

 

　　結(jié)尾段比較了私營(yíng)企業(yè)不能負(fù)責(zé)醫(yī)療的原因，私營(yíng)企業(yè)總是把利益放在第一位，政府才會(huì)真正把公眾的利益放在金錢(qián)前面。

 

　　看完這篇文章后，試著把我們前面提到的另外兩題寫(xiě)一寫(xiě)，你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)論據(jù)都是可以通用的。