人與人之間的關(guān)系，其實(shí)一直是雅思寫作考試中比較常見的考試范圍。通常家人之間的關(guān)系、同學(xué)同事之間的關(guān)系還算比較常出現(xiàn)；更有甚者可能會(huì)考察年輕人與老年人之間的關(guān)系。

 

　　這次考察了鄰里之間的關(guān)系，也算是有些小眾的話題。但是，該題目的提問(wèn)方式較為簡(jiǎn)單，是一個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的雙問(wèn)題報(bào)告。北京環(huán)球教育（原環(huán)球雅思）楊亮老師認(rèn)為這種文章在行文過(guò)程中，基本可以不用考慮結(jié)構(gòu)的問(wèn)題，最穩(wěn)妥的四段法也肯定是 選擇。

 

　　題目如下：

 

　　City dwellers seldom socialize with their neighbors today and the sense of community has lost.Why this happens?And how to solve this?20160924

 

　　兩個(gè)問(wèn)題，因此毫不猶豫地選擇四段法。分別用一個(gè)主段來(lái)回應(yīng)一個(gè)問(wèn)題。由于篇幅限制，通常情況下每個(gè)問(wèn)題的回應(yīng)會(huì)被分為兩個(gè)分論點(diǎn)進(jìn)行討論。這樣對(duì)論證來(lái)說(shuō)比較規(guī)范，盡管如此下文并沒(méi)有采用這一傳統(tǒng)方式。

 

　　Neighbors have not been on the list of persons who people can call to have a chat or party together for a long time,since people began to move to relatively isolated apartment buildings to live in.With majority of people realizing the significance of contact with others living around,it is the high time to step out of their apartments to enjoy the time with their neighbors.

 

　　開頭段，實(shí)則全是背景的描述。因?yàn)楸绢}是報(bào)告類的問(wèn)題，對(duì)于點(diǎn)題要求不高。并不比像以往題目當(dāng)中一定要將本題爭(zhēng)論的要點(diǎn)轉(zhuǎn)述出來(lái)。

 

　　All reasons that might lead to this situation can be attributed to people's modern lifestyle with excessive stress and hurry.In the morning,most people will rush to where they work or study,and thus they have no time to chat with who come out of the same building with them.Usually,a smile or a nod to others is what people can only do for greeting.Similarly,after a whole day's tiring work,in the evening few people can still be energetic to talk to whoever they meet in their community.The only thing they are willing to do is rushing home.Weekends are so precious for them that majority of them will choose to stay at home to spend time with their family.

 

　　其實(shí)，本段只是論證了一個(gè)導(dǎo)致這一尷尬事實(shí)的原因。隨后，通過(guò)時(shí)間層次來(lái)分別論證了這一論點(diǎn)。這并不是一個(gè)傳統(tǒng)的報(bào)告類文章的論證方式。各位可以借鑒。

 

　　Dragging urban residents out of their flats requires a series of methods.In the urban planning stage,residential buildings should not be designed that crowdedly in order to leave adequate open space for public activity areas like places for fitness facilities and gardens.Thereafter,under supervision of local governments,real estate developers ought to be responsible for installing those facilities and building gardens for local residents.After people moving in these buildings,local committees should be in charge of organizing community activities at weekends or on public holidays regularly,inviting who live around to offer them a chance to get relaxation from participating in some group recreational activities with their neighbors in the areas designed by governments and built by developers.

 

　　本段亦是如此，其實(shí)就是一個(gè)解決方案。只不過(guò)從不同階段開始論證而已。和傳統(tǒng)的兩個(gè)方案的并列結(jié)構(gòu)有所不同。

 

　　Most of people have already realized the importance of getting along well with their neighbors,and however why they still do not know each other is just because they are more likely to spend their limited free time so as to loosen up by themselves.Once opportunities for both getting relaxation and knowing their neighbors are available,without a shadow of doubt people will be fond of them.

 

　　結(jié)尾總結(jié)了全文的兩個(gè)主段，中規(guī)中矩。

 

　　縱觀全文，盡管結(jié)構(gòu)是非常常規(guī)的四段法，每一個(gè)主段回應(yīng)一個(gè)問(wèn)題，具體的論證方法可能有別于通常情況下各位讀過(guò)的例文。但是，此行文邏輯還是值得推敲的。文章本無(wú)好壞，結(jié)構(gòu)亦是如此。

 

　　環(huán)球教育（原環(huán)球雅思）老師通過(guò)這樣的方式來(lái)論證本篇報(bào)告類文章，也只是想給各位讀者一個(gè)不常規(guī)的方式。歡迎借鑒，歡迎斧正。